His hair, looking so soft sweeping around his face in a neat fashion, his glasses balance on the bridge of his nose, framing around two bottomless pools of deep blue eyes. Eyes that looking too cavernous can make you loose yourself in the kind spirit of his heart. However much you try convincing yourself, you know this man in front of you, you feel as if there's so much more to learn. His slim-line, rich pink lips, twitch up into a cheeky smile, which reveals his uneven set of white teeth. Now is when the thoughts come whirling, speaking different meanings. A voice, when calm is very soothing and simple.A face on a man, after the time of decoding the mental block, is someone truly amazing. Something that should never had taken place in the beginning. Someone with a huge heart that touch so many people's lives. A man who believes in the good of the world, and does his utmost to contain that respect. A man who live to strive to be in the future, a man with a plan, ideas for what he want to do and tries his best to catch his dreams. With a face that looks harder than the internal feelings, a man that can only fool those who don't understand the real side. When you know him, he is very gentle and warm person and someone who cares far more than he should about people. Something that means a lot more, is that he shares his thoughts and how feels, only to the ones he trusts. He likes to be close, and talk about the things that matter most.
For someone who knows this man like the back of their hand, he is unbelievably easy to read. A simple glance, you know his mood. His eyes tell the story, you only have to know what you're looking for. Knowing the simple guesture of stroaking the back of your hand is because he's feeling your pain, to biting his lip and nails, is him deeply thinking. A man who always does everything you predict and everything you couldn't imagine, there's always a new look in his eye, a new facial expression and thought to be spoken. Someone you could spend forever with and still think there's something else within him. Less is always meaning a lot more. A man who knows the real impact of words and how important they are. A smirk speak the tale. A man who has an opinion and isn't afraid by sharing it, conversing the magnificence of his mind. Someone who can make you smile and laugh for no reason, knowing the right thing to do at the exact time. That takes someone special.
Saying he’s a man, will never do him justice. He’s so much more than a man. On the outside he looks like an everyday type of guy. Different eyes will see other things to what I could see. Ears will hear different things to me; looks will interpret differently to me. But I know his soul is truly beautiful and will always bring a smile to my face. That who he is, my smile. The man I believe.
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This is beautiful Imz! I love the description of his eyes, sound amazing. One of my favourite posts of yours ever.
ReplyDeleteYou have to be a writer when you're older.
P.S - I wonder who you were describing ;)
"Knowing the simple guesture of stroaking the back of your hand is because he's feeling your pain, to biting his lip and nails, is him deeply thinking."
ReplyDeleteWow Imz; You really do know this guy don't you? Very deep stuff.
Someone's Observant! :P
ReplyDeleteYour words are very care fully chosen and due to this makes the writing more intimate
ReplyDeleteThe image also helps the viewer, but i think itd be better without - personally, left to imagination then
good writing Imz.
Beautiful Piece of Writing Imz. Love the description, also like how you mention it's how you view this man, hear, see and think of him - I take it you know this male very well? Close friend? Boyfriend, maybe?
ReplyDeleteLike said above, carefully chosen words - You have a gift for words. Flows perfectly, should be very proud of this post -Our Favourite-
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It's your Josh! :D
ReplyDeleteClear you think the world of him Imz! Bless - Like it very much!
Keep Writing X
But I know his soul is truly beautiful and will always bring a smile to my face. That who he is, my smile. The man I believe.
ReplyDeletePerfect ending! It's lovely writing Imz. Amazing stuff! Should be a writer! Think alot of this guy don't you eh? I suggest you keep hold of him if he means this much to you. (yes, it's obvious Imz) :)
How's that new story of yours? LTN?! Chapter One had me glued! Me wanties to read the next Chapter!
You have talent! Persue it!
Amazing words. It's like poetry.
ReplyDeleteEmotional piece of work.
:)
Wow.
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Wow.
I got lost in this.
you sound extremely close, you can feel the connection you feel with this guy when you're together, it's really something quite special. like Joan said, keep hold of him if he means this much.
ReplyDeletespeaking for everyone here, you clearly adore this man.
Keep writing, love your work!
love how you notice the little things about him - thats how you know, on any level its true.
ReplyDeletei agree with comment above :)
"With a face that looks harder than the internal feelings, a man that can only fool those who don't understand the real side. When you know him, he is very gentle and warm person and someone who cares far more than he should about people."
ReplyDeleteSo Cute.
Have to agree with the last 2 comments.
Sounds like you both have a beautiful friendship/relationship together.
Imz its AMAZING!!!
ReplyDeleteWow very touching piece, love how it flows as if we're all experiencing the same dream.
Imogene Emerald Rogers, this is pure talent. :D
ReplyDeletebtw, he does have nice eyes, lucky sod! LOL!
Very airy fairy n' you're great for that! Keep it up lovey!
I'm commenting beacuse loads of people are!
ReplyDeleteSame here, i love it too Imz
sounds like a love story? is this real or a hypothatical case?
Ever so romantic! I could see this being put in a book somewhere, along with your other works. love how you only consider this as a hobby! Beautiful work once again!
ReplyDeleteLove How You Sound Like You Want Nothing From This Guy, Yet He Seems To Actually Give You Everything You Want. Like Where You Say About Less Is More With Him, You Sound Very Selfless, Yet Easily Made Happy By A Few Moments Together. I Enjoyed Reading This As This Is How Friendship Or Relationships Should Be. Simple Time, Absorbing The Small Things To Glow Up Everything In Your Life.
ReplyDeleteYou Shown The Meaning Of What Love Is All About. Beautiful Writing Imz.
Imz, you never fail to amaze me! Incredible!
ReplyDeleteWow, felt like i was readin twilight all over again! Really enjoyd this, reminds me of how bella see's her Edward.....
ReplyDeletethis perfect being that you truley understand and relate to, love for the little things...
i like how you talk about his face,in great deatil, seems like something you recognise. doesnt seem a face you're going to ever forget.
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Would hate to see how you feel if you ever lost him :(
ReplyDeleteLike Joans comment, make sure you keep him if he means this much to you - he sounds a nice guy, and someone who make you happy.
is this done for a purpose? or just general writing? you seem to like writing about this 'guy'
ReplyDeleteGreat Work!!!
So Glad you didn't decide to do it factual!
ReplyDeleteWould have runied your perfect work, and also wouldhn't have engaged your mind.
Always stick to your 'Airy Fairy' Stuff like *Billy* says.
Suits you.
I got completely and utterly lost within this. Made me want to cry; it's so beautiful. I'm actually jealous of you, having someone you adore as much as him.
ReplyDeleteWe were talking about this piece the other night. You were saying you were going to write about what you love and hate? I notice there's no hate - what happened there? Or did you realised you love him, even with the things that you 'hate'? Yes of course you did! Couldn't possibly hate anything about him, even when you do rant and moan from time to time.
ReplyDeleteSo sorry I didn't manage to comment early on, but thank you for the email you sent me. I've missed reading your writing. You know what I think about your work Imz.
It's very deep stuff, a very emotional person, you have your own style and feelings, you're a very talented person Imz. Don't be so modest!
Love the work Imz, he sounds like a decent guy you should keep hold of, but we all know you will anyway, no matter what goes on. He's your best friend, that's clear enough when you talk about him. Good Luck Sweetie.
I love your style! has a very dream-like effect, it's beautiful. like alice says; "Dont be so modest!"
ReplyDeleteSounds like you have someone special in your life; i'm really happy for you.
Of course its a friend you're talking about, if it was a lover you'd speak of the more intimate side, like a kiss. also from alic again, it's so clear he's your best friend when you talk about him.
I like how someone commented on how itd be if you lost him, maybe write how your world would be without him? Just an idea. A pleasure to read!
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I like how Amalie says about your world without him - should write it. It'd be like a series of small works about him.
ReplyDeleteAnother Idea!
Fantastic work, it's simply amazing.
ReplyDeleteAm speechless.
I do really like the way you view him and talk to us about him.
ReplyDeleteYou're so talented Imz. Keep writing!